We have dediced to leave out the live action bit, I thought this would work but I was out-voted. We changed it because it apparently wouldn't fit. We will most probably not film the Molly scene because Hannah has alraedy done the editing.
On the original writing side, The dialogue (which can be found on my blog somewhere) at the start is mainly taken from Eastender's, I tried to show Conor in the darkest way to show that he was a abusive husband, I did do some "happy memories" but they were cut out. I also did the "bad memories" which weren't cut out, we shot those because it made the audience realise how abusive Conor was and make more tension within the audience. The running is taken from the original Florence video and I see it has the "Walk of Suicide". I know, gloomy title but it shows how abuse can cause things like that. By doing this it shows the effect's of abuse. the suicide scene was improvised and to be honest, I could of done better. However it's better than nothing. Whilst filming in all the scene's I tried to do more flowing shots because I usually do short clips and also I have taken it from my main influence Tasya Van Ree. I was alos more creative with the shots eg. using skateboards.
